Soham, thank you for your comments on my story posts! We have been in the same comment group a couple of times, so we have had the opportunity to comment on each others posts more than once, and you always give me such great feedback. I love that you are so honest about what specifically that you like about my posts. I love getting other perspectives on my work, and it has really helped me to improve my later posts! So, thank you!
Hey Soham, thanks for all the comments you leave on my various posts. I appreciate your honesty and feedback and hope that you keep giving me your perspective to improve my future posts.
Hey Soham, great job with the portfolio! I agree with you as well regarding how Hanuman does not get enough credit for his character in the epic. I think he plays a huge role and is one of the most important characters in the epic and isn't really given much credit for. You did a great job retelling the story and adding great depth and details to the character and his actions. I liked how you portrayed him and explained his various acts through the overall epic. I would also go back and find some more detailed events where he was involved and maybe involve those in your portfolio as well! As I was reading I could find some grammar errors so I would definitely go back and read it all out loud and correct them because I have so many errors myself and I had to go back several times and check them! Overall, I think your portfolio looks great and I love the picture you chose of Hanuman as well! I would pick a bigger font size also and maybe get rid of the highlighting since it is kind of hard to read clearly the story. Great job overall though, I think you have the right idea! Good job!
Soham, I decided to read a story in your portfolio as my second comment this week since I had already read your introduction! I really enjoyed reading your latest story in your portfolio, Pandavas escaping. I really liked reading this story in the readings so it was fun to read it in your portfolio and seeing what you did with it! I really enjoyed it! Great job!
Soham,
ReplyDeleteThank you so much for your comments on my posts and stories! They helped me to improve my posts.
Soham, thank you for your comments on my story posts! We have been in the same comment group a couple of times, so we have had the opportunity to comment on each others posts more than once, and you always give me such great feedback. I love that you are so honest about what specifically that you like about my posts. I love getting other perspectives on my work, and it has really helped me to improve my later posts! So, thank you!
ReplyDeleteHey Soham, thanks for all the comments you leave on my various posts. I appreciate your honesty and feedback and hope that you keep giving me your perspective to improve my future posts.
ReplyDeleteHey Soham, great job with the portfolio! I agree with you as well regarding how Hanuman does not get enough credit for his character in the epic. I think he plays a huge role and is one of the most important characters in the epic and isn't really given much credit for. You did a great job retelling the story and adding great depth and details to the character and his actions. I liked how you portrayed him and explained his various acts through the overall epic. I would also go back and find some more detailed events where he was involved and maybe involve those in your portfolio as well! As I was reading I could find some grammar errors so I would definitely go back and read it all out loud and correct them because I have so many errors myself and I had to go back several times and check them! Overall, I think your portfolio looks great and I love the picture you chose of Hanuman as well! I would pick a bigger font size also and maybe get rid of the highlighting since it is kind of hard to read clearly the story. Great job overall though, I think you have the right idea! Good job!
ReplyDeleteSoham, I decided to read a story in your portfolio as my second comment this week since I had already read your introduction! I really enjoyed reading your latest story in your portfolio, Pandavas escaping. I really liked reading this story in the readings so it was fun to read it in your portfolio and seeing what you did with it! I really enjoyed it! Great job!
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