Before Hanuman came to
be, there weren’t many monkeys in the forest. In fact, there used to be only
one monkey who was both a male and a female named Riksharaja. This monkey in
the form of a female monkey gave birth two other monkeys, Vali and Sugriva. Sugriva
was fathered by the sun god Surya, and the other baby monkey Vali was fathered
by Indra, the wind god. Riksharaja was watching her baby monkeys play and noticed that
Sugriva was awfully lonely because Vali would always be training and fighting
to become a strong monkey king. Because of this she asked the god of the winds,
Vayu, to give her another monkey baby so he could keep Sugriva company. Vayu
rejected the offer because he saw another
beautiful monkey. Her name was Anjana.
Anjana was a free
spirit. She liked to swing around the jungle and do whatever she wanted to do,
with no one ever to boss her around. She never had any responsibilities before
either, because all the male monkeys would be at her service in an effort
to make Anjana their wife. Vayu chose Anjana to bear a child with, and Anjana
didn’t refuse either because all she could care about was that she was going to
be with a god, and not just an ordinary monkey. Anjana gave birth to Hanuman.
When
Hanuman was born, Anjana left Hanuman because she could not handle the
responsibility of a child. Hanuman had no one to teach him what things to eat
and things not to eat, and what is dangerous or safe. With no one to take care of him and feed his
hunger, this innocent little monkey was swinging through the trees under the
canopy looking for something to eat. His hunger grew more and more with each
swing, but the poor little monkey still couldn’t find anything to eat. As he
swung through the branches, he accidentally picked one of the skinnier, weaker
branches. The branch broke and Hanuman landed hard on the ground. As Hanuman
lay on the ground in a daze, he saw an orange disk between the leaves of a
couple of trees. His eyes grew large with excitement. He thought he had found a
mango to eat. What Hanuman thought to be a mango was actually the sun in the far
distance about to set. Hanuman (with no knowledge of what it was), reached out
toward the sun.
Vayu worried about Hanuman because his mother left him and there was no one to take care of him. Vayu had to quit his job to make sure Hanuman was safe at all times. Vayu noticed his son and stopped Hanuman from touching the sun and saved him from burning himself. This caused a problem in the world because Vayu is the wind god, and if there is no wind there would be no air, and without air there wouldn’t be people or other animals and bugs. The other gods started to worry and tried to convince Vayu to come back and begin blowing wind again before everyone died, but Vayu was way too concerned about his son. Brahma, the creator of the universe, then gave Hanuman the gift of eternal life. And Surya bought him an unlimited supply of mangos. This way Hanuman could never die from things he didn’t know were dangerous, and he would never go hungry. Satisfied with these gifts given to Hanuman for his safety and hunger, Vayu returned back to his old job and brought back the winds.
Author's Note:
I chose to retell the story of how Hanuman came
to be and explain how he attained eternal life and an unlimited supply of
mangos. I was inspired to write about
Hanuman mainly because I felt like he was not given enough credit in the
Ramayan. The whole story was based around Ram but I felt like no one realized
that without Hanuman and his involvement in Ram’s quest, Ram would not have
been able to be the hero. Especially when Ram dies and Hanuman goes and brings
a whole mountain over to Lanka to help the reviving process. I chose it to be
the first story for my portfolio because I could not think of another better
character from the Ramayan to base a story around, plus I thought Hanuman
deserved some more attention. Not only that but I wanted to give a reason to
why Hanuman was alone and why his mother had left him, so I gave a better
explanation on how Anjana was a free spirit In the story I also included the
story of Riksharaja and her two sons, mainly because it was told in the book
but also it was a good lead up to why the decision of having a baby came up. Even
though Hanuman turns out to be very strong and smart and a huge part of the
Ramayan, I wanted to show that he also was a baby at one point. He is supposed
to be a playful and innocent monkey that just wants to eat all the time. Other
than that I tried to stick to most of what I read in the book but with extra
explanation for the confused readers. This revised version of the story, has
been changed so it has better flow within the paragraphs and story itself too,
as that problem was brought up by one of my classmates. Other than that I fixed
al the grammar errors I could find.
Picture of Hanuman
Bibliography:
Buck, William (1976). Ramayana: King Rama's Way.

Hi Soham, thanks for doing the revisions. Just for future reference, please just edit the existing version, okay? It's very confusing to have more than one version. If you could delete the old version so that there is only the revised version, that would be good! That way people will not accidentally leave comments on the old version. :-)
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ReplyDeleteCaroline WestSeptember 26, 2014 at 5:39 PM
Soham, I really like the amount of detail you have put in to your introduction so far. I think that your introduction provides a great amount of background information as well as a solid foundation for the opening of your stories told later on in your portfolio. I really like how you chose a character that is so important, mentioned often, but the full story is never really put into whole. You did a really good job of giving an overview, but I think that you could have a better flow with more separation of the paragraphs and more ease in and out of each paragraph, but that is just a suggestion. I think the picture at the end of the introduction is a perfect link way into what ever story is next, and I think it looks very similar to the characters themselves.
I am really looking forward to what your later stories are going to be about in the future and especially how they tie in with the introduction. Your writing is very detailed and well written. I am interested in knowing what your other stories will be about and if they will feature the same character of Hanuman, or feature the impact of him on other important characters.
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Alyssa RucciSeptember 26, 2014 at 11:56 PM
Soham, I am so so excited to be reading your work once again! First off, I really like the background and layout of your portfolio. I think the different shades of brown match well with the "monkey" theme. The map in the background is really cool, I have actually thought of doing a background similar to this with my storybook since it is all about traveling. Your introduction was really great, I think you did a good job at making your points clear from the very beginning and making the topic known right away. The detail you used was amazing, I was captivated as I was reading it. I liked reading this story for one of the weeks when I had to comment on it, so it is cool to see how you have taken that and turned it into this. Overall, I really like how straightforward you are with you introduction, and I think it will draw readers in right away. I saw a few minor grammar issues that you might want to go back over and fix, but other than that your portfolio is amazing so far! I look forward to reading more of your work as always :)
Soham,
ReplyDeleteI like the changes you made to your blog. The color scheme and labels and stuff really give off a "earthy indian" vibe. It definitely suits your first story well. Starting off with your introduction, it drew me right into the story. I felt like it was the perfect mix of being straightforward and still having a storybook feel. I like that you brought Anjana in and labeled her as a care free spirit and gave her almost this "hippie-monkey" feel. In my head, I was definitely imagining a hippie monkey when you described Anjana. Haha.
I think that if you're trying to make the story longer or connect to the readers, maybe you should include a small paragraph about Anjana's feelings after she has the kids. Like instead of just the one sentence about not being able to take care of Hanuman, maybe you could describe her emotions and talk about how she couldn't connect to Hanuman and how she wanted to continue being care-free and responsibility-less.
I also like the picture that you added of Hanuman. It finishes off the story well and helps tie everything together. I think that your first story was great and that your author's note helped a lot! Great job Soham!